DESCRIPTIVE WRITING SAMPLE
DESCRIPTIVE WRITING -SAMPLE
3rd April 2020
DESCRIPTIVE PARAGRAPH SAMPLE
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Today we'll practice writing a
descriptive paragraph
Learning Outcomes -The students will be able to describe
a person using appropriate adjectives and grammatical structures
Apart from the exhaustive list of adjectives that I gave you yesterday
describing a person’s physical characteristics, you can also make use of this
list to describe a person’s behaviour:
SOME
ADJECTIVES DESCRIBING THE PERSON’S CHARACTER: sincere,
hardworking, responsible,outspoken, energetic, thoughtful, attentive,pleasant,
trustworthy,cheerful, friendly,positive, motivated, helpful, enthusiastic,
compassionate, helpful
Sample 1:
An Old Man
The old man who lives
down the street is a reclusive character. He only comes out of his house
occasionally, usually to collect his pension. His hair is very unusual and lush with a salt and pepper tint. It seems he reads until late at night
because he has crow’s feet under
his eyes and is often seen smoking a cigar. One reckons, he must be in his
seventies because his face is time
chiselled and weather beaten. At times he can seem a bit spiritless, as if life and old age are
getting the better of him. The clothes he wears are sometimes ragged and threadbare also, as if he
is giving in to the passage of time and is unconcerned about his appearance.
His hand becomes
clenched when the cold winds of winter bite the air. His fingers get knotty and then the hand forms the
shape of a claw. He smiles to people who sees him on the street and there are a
lot of megawatts in it! It
totally transforms his face and the years drops
away from his face. Although his voice trembles when he says hello, I know then that he hasn’t given up completely on life.
Sample
2:
My
grandmother:
My grandmother is the nicest person I know. She makes those
beautiful chocolate éclairs that all grandchildren love and she is very
generous with them. Her hair has is gunmetal grey and is long and
lush. Sometimes her eyes can appear milky when she is tired but usually
they are gleaming with energy. Her face can appear world weary at
times also but usually she is active and alert. Every Saturday she walks the
two miles into town and then she can appear drowsy in her movements on
the way home. In the winter her fingers get slightly inflamed from the
cold but she says it doesn’t hurt her. I have never seen her wear shabby
clothes and they are always clean and fresh. She has the most angelic
smile I have ever seen and, even though her voice can appear feeble at
times, she is very healthy.
ASSIGNMENT:
Q.1
Write a descriptive paragraph on Mother Teresa 120-150 words
OR
Q.2 Write
a descriptive paragraph on a suspect whom you caught red handed 120-150 words
You can begin like this……………
The suspect was a dark,
approximately six feet tall with a medium build. He looked young,
perhaps between 20 and 25 years of age. He was wearing ……………………………………….
RECAP OF CLASSWORK AND HOME WORK:
Work highlighted in yellow
has to be done in your language notebook
Today’s work:
LEARNING OUTCOMES
ADJECTIVES
SAMPLE 1
SAMPLE 2
ANY ONE QUESTION
GUESS THE
IDIOM ILLUSTRATED BELOW AND WRITE ITS MEANING IN THE COMMENT SECTION: